Tuesday, March 10, 2009
Write in Jumbled Syntax
Videogames is nowadays the kids problem. Out of the whole world, a kid is stuck in a room. He doesn’t know anyone, or her, sometimes a girl can be it. Unless they are playing with friends and on the Internet, and it’s better. Have you ever seen a video game – if not you should? You would see its ineducatable. First of all, when you blow things up; finally, some videogames are puzzles and good for the brain, but why? Not unless they do good, and the rest is bad, after all they are made with people, and perfect people are not.
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Not so much jumbled syntax (there's definitely some) as simply bad writing and grammar.
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