Monday, April 20, 2009

Write About the Moment at which Sleep Takes Place

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1 comment:

  1. I'm not quite sure how this accomplishes the exercise, but I like it anyway. I was actually trying to do something a little bit more experimental by shaping the poem with some unusual spacing; but blogger for whatever reason doesn't allow you to put initial spaces, and that plan was thwarted. You may e-mail me if you are interested in seeing what I originally came up with. The words, however, are the same.

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